Well, the honeymoon has been an adventure thus far. After a very bumpy plane ride a rental car agent tried to scam us by making us pay for a car and for insurance for four days longer than we’re actually going to be here. Alayna handled that… let’s just say that I’m glad that she’s on my side. Then we had to find the hotel, get checked in, and get dinner (at 10 pm). Today was all beach trips and sales presentations, but so far it’s going fairly well. Anyway, I hope that you are all having a wonderful day! I know that you’re here for a scene challenge. If you can’t remember the rules, I’ll provide them: I provide you with specific rules for how to write a particular scene. Try to keep your scene under five hundred words, and try to keep it in the same tone as the introduction. If I give a line that is very dark and depressing, then I don’t want to see a scene about a drunken monkey in a tutu…it just doesn’t fit. If I do give you a line about a drunken monkey in a tutu, then you should probably try for a funny scene.
Your rules: You task this week is to write a scene of at least 300 words in sentences of no more than six words. If you’ve been following the blog then you’ve seen this challenge before. Remember to make sure that the scene is grammatically correct, and that it flows well. Again, you might want to give it to a grammar nazi after you finish to make sure that your grammar is solid. Your cue: “This deal will change your life:…”